www: P1 You have described the hardware and software used to create and edit graphic images ebi:You created a more indepth table and were able to communicate in more detail why the hardware and software that you require is so important for an graphic design business.
EBI: You were to discuss this with me. 1 You need to have better introduction. 2 You need to include in the report the hardware and software used to create and edit graphic images. 3 Then to justify when you need them.
www: P1 You have described the hardware and software used to create and edit graphic images
ReplyDeleteebi:You created a more indepth table and were able to communicate in more detail why the hardware and software that you require is so important for an graphic design business.
EBI: This is not enough for a report. I suggest that you include the why information and specifications of the device sthat you require in the report.
ReplyDeleteEBI: You were to discuss this with me.
ReplyDelete1 You need to have better introduction.
2 You need to include in the report the hardware and software used to create and edit graphic images.
3 Then to justify when you need them.
Well done P1 achieved.
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